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How long...
Contributed by
elatednbliss
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:37:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Far beyond devotion
in the depths of my soul
is where my love waits for you
where my heart beats for you
When my thoughts won't collect
and nothing seems right
I see you in my mind
and you calm me...
At night when I kneel to pray
and ask god why I'm here
I envision you and me
and I cherish living...
Life has tracked me through the mud
and lead me on an endless road
I've walked hundreds of miles
and you found me...
far beyond forever
greater than eternity
nothing can compare
to how long I'll love you...
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2004-10-29 15:37:03]
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Re: How long...
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:44:11 PM AEST
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Nicely written...
You should try writing poetry 'just because'. It's an excellent way to keep all your emotions from building up. |
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Re: How long...
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by theMoth on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 04:28:43 PM AEST
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Very passionate.
Yeah, I don't like poetry for
poetry's sake.
But if you think about things...
You will have so much to say...
...even if the world
doesn't want to hear it.
Then you're really onto something.
--Mothy |
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