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Redemption
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:22:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Among the shadows
darkness breathes
the devil takes my soul for ransom
a single light
pierces the night
like a razor
explosive and phantasmal
sharp to touch
deadly as sin
yet a tempting sacrifice it offers
a choking solace
embraces me
as I surrender
only awaiting another
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bonita2689
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2004-10-29 12:22:30]
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Re: Redemption
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:32:32 PM AEST
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deep and dark, a great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Redemption
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by skyblumoon on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 01:07:30 PM AEST
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This so sad and dark. I hope you don't do anyhting senseless. None is worth more than your life. Hang in there. If if you ever need to talk em me.
Blu |
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Re: Redemption
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 02:32:44 PM AEST
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| excellent write. very well written. |
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