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Siddhalepa
Contributed by
Mihiri
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:41:29 AM in AEST
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City girls despise your very name,
They confuse ‘scent’ with ‘smell’,
When you’re the only medicine,
That treats each bump and swell
They refuse your assured advice,
They turn to the transparent gel
Rheumatism, coughs, colds and headaches,
There’s ‘most nothing you can’t dispel
So, what’s all the commotion?
It seems that all is well,
But, the city girls don’t agree,
They crave the Western sell
Copyright ©
Mihiri
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2004-10-29 10:41:29]
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Re: Siddhalepa
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:47:08 AM AEST
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| Herbal medicence is good for the ails, though many exploit it with crap, cool poem short and intriguing, I catching, liked it. |
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Re: Siddhalepa
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by pixie on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:50:36 AM AEST
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a differetn write from what I am used to reading, but short and intresting :) i liked it,
pixie xx |
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Re: Siddhalepa
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by weezer21 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 12:56:49 PM AEST
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different, but hey it was good i liked it
-x jessi x- |
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Re: Siddhalepa
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 11:52:07 PM AEST
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| very nice. |
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