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the hare
Contributed by
kitty_girl
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:46:10 AM in AEST
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the thunder flashing
and lightning crashing
the cry of the horses
the men ready
the hounds set free
the hare sprinting
the hounds snaping
the guns loaded
the men shooting
the hare dodjing
the hounds snifferling
they have lost him!!!!
but they know that he'll be back!!!
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2004-10-29 09:46:10]
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Re: the hare
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by pixie on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:53:15 AM AEST
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good write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: the hare
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:42:49 AM AEST
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Cool poem, interesting theme, and imagery, though next time onyl tap the post poem once.
But the poems all good anyhowz. |
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