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Fairy Tale Me
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:06:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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You come to me with riddles and rymes of times we were never alive
we reminisce and try to feel the days that really were never real
a dream an illusing a time of distortion
mindless, incoherent, obsessive, absolete
we say things like remeber when, but I cannot remeber the days I wish to forget
take me to another land, one of mystery and lies
that is where I want to live, not in my life of lives
tales are all you speak to me, tales of untrue happenings
I never did that, i never said that, you are misunderstood
the past is not reality, just a pretend existance
how do we really know we were alive all those years?
Memories, photographs, writing on the wall...
but can those images and materials not be forged?
Could I have been born just yesterday, just an hour ago, right this second?
could these things have not been planted here for me to think I remember?
Maybe you are in on it...
maybe you planned it from the start
you sneaky man of mystery, how can I trust this?
You could have made my face and picked my body, created my mind an inserted a soul
What you wanted to the tee, is it true, did you make me?
Did you think of all the stories to upload in my brain
of times i did this and that and this and the other and oh yeah that time...
you are a tricky one.
You have erased my power to know the truth, so I will have to settle for your fairy tale me.
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Rxqueen
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2004-10-29 08:06:12]
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Re: Fairy Tale Me
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by Thivanka on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:27:17 AM AEST
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Really good perspective you have presented here, I liked it because that’s what we all want to know whether we truly did exist in past times or not; the thought that one’s existence is virtually based on another’s memory is too….fragile. Who knows? Maybe we are all one another’s fairytale.
—Thivanka
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Re: Fairy Tale Me
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by pixie on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:29:19 AM AEST
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a good psychotic write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Fairy Tale Me
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by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:35:02 AM AEST
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Psychotic & perplexing :)
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Re: Fairy Tale Me
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:01:55 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: Fairy Tale Me
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:40:36 PM AEST
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this is really good...i liked it alot...leaves a person questioning their past....awesome job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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