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These Days
Contributed by
crash
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 07:25:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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The worse they are
the longer they last
whether a popular prep
or a forgotten outcast
The better ones
are short liven
and as always
few are given
Copyright ©
crash
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2004-10-29 07:25:08]
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Re: These Days
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by Dawny on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:23:56 AM AEST
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Hiya
This is good for a first poem, short and sweet but sometimes short poems are the best. Keep writing
Love Dawny x |
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Re: These Days
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:45:04 AM AEST
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This is pretty good for a first poem. Keep writing.
Spazzo |
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Re: These Days
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:08:15 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. short and sweet, and full of meaning. |
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