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I do not know
Contributed by
crash
on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 07:21:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Why I let her
get so close
I do not know
Why it hurt
when she left
I do not know
Why I lived
and did not die
I do not know
Why for her
I tried to die
I do not know
Why these pains
go unhealed
I do not know
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Re: I do not know
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by pixie on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 07:28:03 AM AEST
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yes simple and very emotional, your wounds will heal one day, it will take time,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: I do not know
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by Wicked on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 07:45:29 AM AEST
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nice write...simple but says so much.
Wicked |
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Re: I do not know
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by Dawny on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:25:25 AM AEST
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I agree, simple but effective and to the point. You can feel the doubt and confusion.
Nice poem
Love Dawny x |
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Re: I do not know
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:46:30 AM AEST
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Very emotional, your pain will heal.
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Re: I do not know
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by SarahB on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:56:38 AM AEST
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| I feel left out, there's not a poem that i've read with my name in it...grrr lol j/k |
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Re: I do not know
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by apcfan on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:43:25 PM AEST
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good write... hey are you in my head.....
read my poem i dont know and you'll understand.
apcfan |
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Re: I do not know
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:09:31 PM AEST
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| i agree with pixie. keep up the good writes. |
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