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Biss
Contributed by
happybunnyfan
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 01:08:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Everyday is like a storm
A life so cold nothing warm,
Feel so alone, my life is gone
the nights become so very long,
Upon my heart deep inside lies
A burning flame that never dies,
The golden heart makes my pluse race
Eyes look upon the beautiful face,
Vocie of an angel, she speaks to me
Now that she's gone there's so much to see,
Life goes on slowly, gave all i had then
Feeling so lonely, i'd give that again,
Knowing you are gone, i have you no more
I try to be strong, my emotions at war,
And the day i die, know you'll be on my mind,
A love that gave bliss, but forever missed.
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2004-10-29 01:08:03]
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Re: Biss
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by Clementine on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 01:20:17 AM AEST
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| You've captured real emotion, and it flows real well.. Great write! |
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Re: Biss
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by Sholdershy on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:51:47 AM AEST
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AWESOME!!!!!!!!
Very well witten , I would have never guessed it was your first love poem, You have a true talent. |
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Re: Biss
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by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 06:46:44 AM AEST
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Nicely done :)
Happy Bunny ROX !!! |
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Re: Biss
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by Dawny on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:27:36 AM AEST
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This is brilliant, hard to believe its your first love poem. You express such emotion, and the poem flows really well.
You have a great talent
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Biss
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 04:45:48 PM AEST
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| as I recall, that is what love is like |
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Re: Biss
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:22:09 PM AEST
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ok i truly felt this very true great work keep it up..
HeNO UnKnOwN BuTterFly |
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