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You Told Me

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



You told me you were a jerk
You told me I was too good for you
You told me not to love you
You told me you loved someone else
You told me you liked me as a friend
You told me you didn't deserve me
You told me it would never work
You told me I would only end up getting hurt
You told me I deserved someone better
You told me you didn't want to hurt me
You told me to find someone else
You told me all of this
But I didn't listen to you
And you were right about everything you told me
You were a jerk, but you thought you did what was best
I really shouldn't have loved you, it only hurt me
I should have listened to you
Because you told me...




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Re: You Told Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:55:55 AM AEST
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See....all guys arent full of s..t ! lol Great write!


Re: You Told Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:11:06 AM AEST
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Interesting write.. I'm glad youre friends...
Jenni


Re: You Told Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazaholic on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 12:59:49 PM AEST
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sometimes we`re so blinded we can`t see or hear the truth. glad your good friends now hard to find honest friends anymore.


Re: You Told Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 12:12:09 PM AEST
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Yes Candice,
A woman once told me similar things, but as usual I didn't listen! I hope one day I learn to hear what people are actually trying to warn me about instead of only hearing what I wish so much for to be true/real!
Another very good, full of feeling write here Candice, just sorry hese things have to happen like this, but pleased to hear you could be good friends after.

With love
Dean:-)


Re: You Told Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 12:16:15 PM AEST
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Dean, I think that we are such good friend after all this because we were really good friends before it all happened. Before I really realized that I liked him that way I would skip study hall just to hang out with him. The only time in my life I have ever skipped class. But at least it was only study hall. It's not like I skipped math or something inportant like that. I was never a bad kid. I didn't really get into much trouble.
ShadowsCloud


Re: You Told Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 12:34:30 PM AEST
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No niether did I Candice,
I was too busy daydreaming to get into any trouble!Hehe
I always got my work done though, and the teachers always marked me really well, even though I didn't really concentrate! I guess I was just one of the lucky ones who seemed to understand everything without really needing to try all that hard! I do know I'm very lucky for being this way.
I'm pleased to know you're a good girl, as I'm sure your Mom is too!

With love
Dean:-)


Re: You Told Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 12:39:16 PM AEST
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Dean, I day dreamed alot in class to. I am one of those people as well with certain subjects. Really the only call I always paid attention in was chorus because that was my favorite class.
My mom is happy that I am well behaved. But what most people don't know is that I can be really wild when I want to be. The few people who have seen that side of me have liked it.
ShadowsCloud


Re: You Told Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 12:53:33 PM AEST
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I can only imagine Candice,
I'll try not to though!Hehehe
I too can be a bit of a handfull when with the right people who I think at the time I can trust with knowing the other, wilder side of me, not so often lately though!:-(

I hope you're practicing singing for the wedding, I know it's not till May but you can never practice too much now!

With love
Dean:-)


Re: You Told Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 01:01:17 PM AEST
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Dean, I sure that you can imagine. And you might just be right. I have done some pretty wild things in my 20 years.
Of course I am practicing for the wedding. I practice every day. Even if I was going to be singing at the wedding I woud practice every day, because i love to sing.
ShadowsCloud


Re: You Told Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 01:06:41 PM AEST
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No I'm really trying not to!! Even though I probably could Candice!hehe
And it's good to hear that do love singing so, I'd love it too if I could!

With love
Dean:-)


Re: You Told Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 01:09:34 PM AEST
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Dean, you know not every one has the same talents ;) we should just be happy with the ones we have I know I am.
ShadowsCloud


Re: You Told Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:10:34 PM AEST
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This Is Cute




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