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Nothing is left
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:57:12 AM in AEST
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burning all these things
we worked so hard for
now everything is up in flames
the ashes fall to the ground
what did they bring
crying hitting the floor
no one left to blame
dizzy going round and round
nothing is left
but ashes on the ground
i must lift
myself off the ground
i'm empty
all this wasted
wasted away
i'm empty
with everything gone
i put this gun to my head
all the fun is done
and now i'm dead
even you're gone
why didnt you put this gun to my head
the fun is shortly done
as soon as i'm dead
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Re: Nothing is left
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 01:06:54 AM AEST
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| good write. hopefully this is just a poem... |
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Re: Nothing is left
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by happybunnyfan on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 01:14:24 AM AEST
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| very good, i really did enjoy. i hope that its not true. kepp the poetry coming ur every good. |
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Re: Nothing is left
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by cheech on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 01:34:20 AM AEST
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there may be nothing left of ur relationship with meat head but theres alot left in u and i know that,this was good i really liked it,love ya more than u know
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Re: Nothing is left
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by booboo on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 04:33:12 AM AEST
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aww dont feel like that,theres no need to feel as if everything is gone,and theres also no need on wanting to be dead especially being murdered i'd rather drownd then be murdered but thats me but still please dont do something stupid ur family be the 1's paying for it then,good poem i liked how you had everything rhyming in a pattern i just didnt really like the meaning but i guess the meaning makes it a poem eh?keep 'em comen
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Re: Nothing is left
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by pixie on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 05:52:35 AM AEST
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awww i hope that there is something left, underneath all that heartache you will find yourself, it will take abit of time, emotional poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Nothing is left
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by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 06:49:46 AM AEST
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| Emotional write :) I enjoyed it. |
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