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Princes of Crimson Life
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:27:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Princes of blood
In the dark blood red of night
Came upon such a sight
An angel with long black wings
Never has there been a more alluring scene
With crimson stains around her face
Giving to her beauty grace
And a bright red glow shown from her eyes
Dimming all the stars in the sky
Her skin was white so very pale
Turning the white from the moon frail
Sending it to hide behind the clouds
To be worn by the moon like a shroud
Overcastting eyes and shades
Looking in them feeling a million ways
Knowing that looking in them would be a mistake
For when taken there is no escape
You will be hers now and forever
Her ties to you she will never sever
Princes of crimson life
Such a magnificent sight
As you in the dark like a dream
No one has ever seen
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Re: Princes of Crimson Life
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:35:00 AM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: Princes of Crimson Life
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by slayer_015 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 04:51:46 AM AEST
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Vivid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vampires!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good job!!!!!!!!!!!
Brian |
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Re: Princes of Crimson Life
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by pixie on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 06:15:01 AM AEST
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great expression, great poem John,
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Re: Princes of Crimson Life
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by ElatedNBliss on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 04:04:58 PM AEST
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| i like this nice job |
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