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My little secret....
Contributed by
wild_girl121
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:04:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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lonesome tears cried at night, waiting for this light to shine in youre eyes.
i have waited but still no hope is found, all is lost in this time... and in these
eyes i am looking, but they are looking right though me.... why have all these
times i have tried to tell you, just pass as a unspoken secret .
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2004-10-29 00:04:42]
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Re: My little secret....
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 01:11:03 AM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE A SECRET LOVE IN YOUR HEART~& IS THE HARDEST PART! TELL IT & YOU MIGHT JUST FIND HAPPINESS,OTHERWISE YOU'LL NEVER KNOW AT ALL!! IF YOU CAN SPEAK AS WELL IN WORDS AS YOU WRITE YOU MIGHT BE WITHIN REACH OF SOMETHING SO NICE!!! NICE POEM!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: My little secret....
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by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 06:47:45 AM AEST
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Very deep write :)
Great job. |
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