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The old you

Contributed by happy_bingme on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:12:13 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

If you could only see yourself the way I use too.
You’d see what a good person you use to be.
You’d see why people liked you, just for you.
You’d see why you meant so much to everyone, especially me.
You’d see why you were looked up to and admired by almost all.
But for some reason you didn’t like that man.
The man who’s life was on a good track.
The man that had a great life ahead to plan.
A man that would go somewhere in life, somewhere good.
You threw it all away to be a boy.
A stupid, immature boy.
Someone that no one could look up too.
Someone mean and hateful to the ones that love him.
You keep trying so hard to find what you want.
But you really had it already.
You just choice to throw it all away.

I don’t like the person you have become or the things you do.
I wish you could see how great it use to be, to be you.
You may not have noticed it, but we did.
He is someone that does not need to be hid.
We wish he’d come back to us someday.
Someday when you really listen to what I say.
Because deep down you knows it true.
We want back the old you.

Copyright Â© happy_bingme ... [ 2004-10-28 23:12:13]
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