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I cut myself for emotional suicide
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:51:27 PM in AEST
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And the world stops for a brief moment.
My knees hit the ground with a crash.
And my ears rang those words again and again...
It seeps into my nightmares...
It's in so deep I don't know life without it.
Left out by you to cry.
You took and you took...
And I've got nothing more to give.
The fact that I loved you wasn't enough...
The fact that I loved you was just a lie...
I lied to myself when you were lying to me.
You said I was beautiful,
And I felt better about being me.
You said you loved every part of me,
So I showed you everything I had.
And I believed you when you said...
You'd never hurt me.
Just like I believed the knife...
Would help bleed my broken heart dry when I left you.
I spent the entire day alone in the park...
With my head in my hands,
My knife on my lap,
And suicide on my mind.
I thought I'd kill myself to make you feel bad.
But I decided to stay and have a happy life...
And show you what you missed out on.
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Re: I cut myself for emotional suicide
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by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:09:05 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written. |
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Re: I cut myself for emotional suicide
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:35:52 PM AEST
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| amazing write. powerful and well written. full of emotion. |
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Re: I cut myself for emotional suicide
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by HatingMalice on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:36:05 PM AEST
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| now that was deliciously well written :P |
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Re: I cut myself for emotional suicide
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by girish on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:44:02 AM AEST
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| i love the poem love the finish if i should love you love me |
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Re: I cut myself for emotional suicide
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by screwup on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 06:40:06 AM AEST
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VERY SAD... it made me wanna cry. I'm glad you chose to stay with us and show them what they're missing. I remember feeling just as you are. You may or may not believe me, but the heart does eventually heal. It will probably take a lot of time but you would eventually heal.
~screwup |
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