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My own private hell, lets all bleed tonight
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:35:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You've drained from me my last tear...
No cups could fill the blood I've spilt for you.
You've made me what I am today,
I'm nothing today, no more than I was when I saw you there.
I came running, I came screaming...
Knowing you were dead inside,
No more of what we use to have...
This one sided conversation wont solve itself.
I'm so mad I'll hate you for now, but I'll love you forever.
Cause I need you and I want you back.
I need to have you with me cause you and I both know,
No one will ever love each other like we will...
I'll hold you here and clean the wound.
Why did you take your life? I was your life...
You took me... you killed your life and you killed me.
Now we both die and it's so awful to be this way.
I'm the walking dead and your not here.
So I screamed and I screamed and I saw the mess on the wall.
The blood marks down to where you lay and I died so much,
And I'll die until the day we meet again.
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Re: My own private hell, lets all bleed tonight
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:14:55 AM AEST
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Re: My own private hell, lets all bleed tonight
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by Rxqueen on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:17:14 AM AEST
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I'm so mad I'll hate you for now, but I'll love you forever.
I love that line. That was a very powerful and emotional peice. I had tears in my eyes. I really think it was wonderful. I also like:
I'm the walking dead and your not here.
So I screamed and I screamed and I saw the mess on the wall.
The blood marks down to where you lay and I died so much,
And I'll die until the day we meet again.
How can you be alive when the person who has your heart is gone, you cannot live with out a heart... Once again, beautiful write, very sad. |
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