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Wretched
Contributed by
Hollie85
on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:27:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I collapsed to the ground suddenly,
choking on the words filling my mind.
A stream of tears fell from my eyes,
as my heart cried on the inside.
Coughing hysterically, I struggled for breath,
shutting my eyes to block out the ache.
I reached for my bong to numb the pain,
but it was not my decision to make.
Visions of death rushed through my head,
as I weighed up what life I had remaining.
My heart throbbed just thinking of him,
and this is what turned me insane.
Copyright ©
Hollie85
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2004-10-28 21:27:13]
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Re: Wretched
(User Rating: 1 )
by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:30:00 PM AEST
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| Good expressing of your emotions. I'm sorry for your situation and I hope things get better for you! Keep ya head up. |
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Re: Wretched
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:12:10 AM AEST
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*hugs*
i felt you're exact pain as i was reading this! |
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