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its my birthday
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:14:14 PM in AEST
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this doesn't really ryme,
but life is a crime
need someone to talk to
no one bothers half the time
happy birthday to me
life is down the drain
how i wish for rain
can't stand another day
just let me fade away
happy birthday to me
this week has been hell
feel like falling in a well
but if you ask me i'll say i'm fine
no one knows what i feel
i can't tell who is real
happy birthday to me
you lied again
i cried again
what a wonderful god that let me down again
what nice names you call me
happy birthday to me
ain't i suppose to feel happy today?
be bonnie and gay?
i feel so cold so alone
so scared so unaware
happy birthday to me
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2004-10-28 20:14:14]
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Re: its my birthday
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by Lovingangel4u on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:28:24 PM AEST
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I like your poem even thro its sad :( Ive felt like this on lots of birthdays too... But there have been some good ones as well. I hope all the ones ahead of you are great ones.
Take Care and Happy Birthday Hugs
~Lovingangel4u~ |
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Re: its my birthday
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:03:30 PM AEST
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| great write. hope you have a good birthday. youll have better ones if it doesnt look up =] |
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Re: its my birthday
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by Red_October on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:01:57 PM AEST
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| Hey....we have the same birthday and mine sucked too. LOL I know how ya feel. I read a couple of your poems, I will go read more soon. You are a good poet. Let the ink flow! Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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