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What is it about you???
Contributed by
LIving_In_My_Dream
on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 06:08:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I think about you all of the time,
and wonder, exactly, what is on your mind.
Could it be 'me' that you're thinking of?
If you have feelings, are they feelings of love?
You're on my mind every minute it seems,
when I am sleeping, you're there in my dreams.
Don't worry about me while we are apart,
I'm keeping you safe, here with me, in my heart.
The feeling I get, it can't be defined,
when I look in your eyes, and you look into mine.
The touch of your hand, the warmth of your kiss,
are things I find I can't resist.
The sound of your voice is like music to me,
your thoughts into words are like sweet poetry.
More beautiful than the most beautiful star,
I find myself wanting to be where you are.
Together forever and never apart,
body and soul and heart to heart.
All I can offer and all I can give,
are yours if you want it... as long as I live.
I don't know how to explain it,
If only you could truly see,
How much I really care for you,
How much you mean to me.
I look forward to seeing you every day,
The grin that belongs only to you,
When I see you I can't help but smile,
There is just something about you.
When you put your hand in mine,
My heart suddenly beats faster,
I wish I could tell you right then and there,
That my life could never be better.
When you wrap your arms around me,
For a simple, gentle hug,
I want to stay in that moment forever,
And tell you how much you really are loved.
When we gradually come close enough together,
Our lips touch, a kiss,
Nothing around us seems to matter,
Because there is nothing sweeter than this.
No words could ever express how much you mean to me,
I hope you have these feelings for me, too;
I can't figure out just what it is,
But there is definitely something very special about you.
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2004-10-28 18:08:00]
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Re: What is it about you???
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 06:14:35 PM AEST
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| Great poem of showing your true feelings, Have a Happy Holloween! |
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Re: What is it about you???
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:20:37 AM AEST
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| omgosh that's beautiful, i feel the same way about my love, and i wonder too. so much emotion, great flow, i love everything about this poem. awesome job. *cries happily that she is not alone in this feeling* |
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Re: What is it about you???
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by falling_octember on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 02:17:28 PM AEST
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| o that was so beautfil. it sent my heart a flutter love is a beautiful thing young sweet soul |
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