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Better
Contributed by
Lovely_4_steve
on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:43:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I just want to go,
be free,
I hate this maybe I should leave, tell the truth to everyone,
I have no where to go.
The only person who gave a damn is now gone.
for good.
Everything is *****.
I ***** hate this,
Why cant I just get away from here.
I never knew all this ***** would happen.
I hate it.
I want to... I dont know,
My feelings are depressed,
I wish I could just ***** slit my wrist,
and not even give a ***** but I cant
I am so out of it.
Noting matters, I want to disappear .
It's been so long since I have felt this way
It seems to me that nothing is going to make me happy
Not even you.
*****.
I want to die
Why cant I jus kill myself and get this ***** over with
I hate it
Nothing is going like it needs to
everything is sucking
I ruined everyones life, including mine,
I just wish I would have never moved here
maybe everything would be better
God I don't know I jus wish everything could go or be different,
I wish I would have never met you
then everything would be better.
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Re: Better
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:52:17 PM AEST
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| not bad very depressing n **** i wished the same things wish i wouldve died in my car wreck so i guess u can kinda say i know what ur talkin about |
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Re: Better
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 06:53:15 PM AEST
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It sounds like you are very focused on someone or something else to make you happy. The source of happiness must come from within yourself. You need to get in touch with your own inner beauty as a person. I think life is always worthwhile, we just don't always appreciate what's going on......
Ver;y emotional
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Re: Better
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:45:42 AM AEST
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| full of emotion. great write. |
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