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I Await You, My Sworn Enemy
Contributed by
Sweet_oleander
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:41:17 PM in AEST
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Sleepless, helpless, cold
Treading through swamps of fear,
I await you.
You will not leave me, I will live my life knowing you will get me.
I feel your Icy breath breathing down my neck.
You are taking your time, you are sick.
You follow me everywhere, and I know I cant escape your hold.
I await you.
You who peaks at me when my eyes cease to open, and I am so afraid, I shiver
I feel your smirk.
You are my only fear...I have no others....you are the only fear a person can possibly have.
Your name is death.
Your reputation proceeds you.
I await you, but I do not welcome you.
Copyright ©
Sweet_oleander
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Re: I Await You, My Sworn Enemy
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:44:43 PM AEST
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Pretty cool stuff.
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Re: I Await You, My Sworn Enemy
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:50:03 PM AEST
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No fear here. I long to meet my Maker. Good write though.
Stitch |
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Re: I Await You, My Sworn Enemy
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 06:59:57 PM AEST
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Good write. However, I view death quite differently. So it is nothing to fear.
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Re: I Await You, My Sworn Enemy
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 07:50:45 PM AEST
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nice poem..well, nothing nice about death..you know.
a couple of spelling mistakes..peaking should be peeking..and proceeds should be preceeds..otherwise the meaning is changed and it's comical..hope you don't mind the correction? |
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Re: I Await You, My Sworn Enemy
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:22:40 PM AEST
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Great write.....i do not fear death....i am longing to take that last breath....but a very good write... i liked it
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: I Await You, My Sworn Enemy
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:48:31 PM AEST
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| Yeah, I have to admit that I fear death myself... it's just so strange to think of not being a part of this world anymore. And no one really knows what death is like. I try not to think about it much. Great write. |
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Re: I Await You, My Sworn Enemy
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:48:21 AM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: I Await You, My Sworn Enemy
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by pixie on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 06:26:06 AM AEST
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hmmm I am abit worried about what will happen when I die, this was a great, dark write
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: I Await You, My Sworn Enemy
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by Dawny on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:59:27 AM AEST
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I really like this, its very dark and ominous, and wonderfully written
Excellent!!!!
Love Dawny x |
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Re: I Await You, My Sworn Enemy
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by SuchGreatHeights on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:42:20 PM AEST
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| I know what you mean. i dont fear death, but i fear how i will die. and like ur last line "i await you, but i do not welcome you" is a perfect line to describe many people's feelings. keep on writing. peace |
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Re: I Await You, My Sworn Enemy
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by Sweet_Oleander on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 07:02:49 PM AEST
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| Thanks , you guys really support me and I appreciate that....No I do not mind the corrections...if anything you put more knowledge in my godforsaken head. |
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