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Softened Dwellers
Contributed by
Lee
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:38:19 PM in AEST
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Such sweet, soft dreams
Near deep waters held in place
By softened shores
Softened dwellers, of whom the night adores...
They appear in a dream-like consciousness
Their pale skin seems less human
and their appetites are monstrous
They weep, for it is a cruel existence
in which they are deprived of love
They wail, for it is their cry for forgiveness
as they wish to be peaceful as doves
Dwelling in softened shores,
they no longer seek to bask in the sun's glory-rays
Coming out with the moon,
they feel such pity for their unknowing prey
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Re: Softened Dwellers
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by arden on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:59:48 PM AEST
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ok just the thought that i could inspire someone blows me away lol
this was really great lee. its a huge change from the rest of your writes. but becareful or you'll get a visit from Dr. Reality. cant have you going all pyscho as well :P
awesome poem. i enjoyed it.
5 stars
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Re: Softened Dwellers
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 01:48:06 PM AEST
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wow,amazing write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Softened Dwellers
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by Clarity_Rising on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:30:30 PM AEST
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| Such beauty is so little words... |
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Re: Softened Dwellers
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by Lee on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:07:31 PM AEST
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Modified for "The StarFlower: Just passing Through the Universe...A Space Opera"
"Softened Dwellers"
Mr. Sand:
"Such sweet, soft dreams
Near deep waters held in place
By softened shores
Softened dwellers, of whom the night adores...
They appear in a dream-like consciousness
They weep, for it is a woeful existence
in which they are deprived of love
They only wish to be as peaceful as doves
Dwelling in softened shores,
they bask in the moon's glory-rays
Coming out with the night to stay"
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