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Baptism of the Pushover
Contributed by
subgenius
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:06:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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The day is sick and the sun is dying
I will bring back the health
Wash my hands and say a prayer
Because tonight I'm doing the devil's dirty work
The mirror has cracked
I see myself breaking up
A head full of evil and a heart full of vengeance
Take control, take me home
Milk and Cookies
I drown you
Raggedy Anne
I wipe that smile
Naughty words
I curse you
XYZ
You're Finished
Tic Tac Toe
I win
Fingernails on a chalkboard
I had to kill the sound
Whores in the streets of California
I had to make it clean
The primate is free from its cage
Free to see another rainbow
I can taste this new day like whine
Baptism of the pushover
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2004-10-28 11:06:42]
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Re: Baptism of the Pushover
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:29:04 AM AEST
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different , but I liked it very much, :)
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Re: Baptism of the Pushover
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by Blackevar on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:36:06 PM AEST
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| Excellent. It's a poem abou ouiji boards right? |
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Re: Baptism of the Pushover
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 10:35:22 AM AEST
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This is a absolutely brilliantly written piece. I loved your clever use of symbolism which complemented the overall flow and structure of the poem.
The first and last stanza's were really amazing!
Much respect and love to you!
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