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One Single Tear
Contributed by
mysticpoet
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:24:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Nearly fifty years together, he was always at her side.
Mom feels so alone since the day dad died.
Alone in their empty home every night and day
She just sits in her rocker, passin' the time away.
One single tear falls now they're apart.
As she clutches his picture close to her heart.
They vowed to love til their lives were through.
Now one single tear falls, her loves’ ever true.
She's lived a good life, now in her twilight years.
Remembers in her heart, the laughter, and the tears.
She recalls his warm eyes as she kissed him good-bye.
He said, I'll be waitin for you, to be back at my side.
She can still feel his warm touch; see the love in his eyes
Hear him say I love you as she tries not to cry.
But, one single tear falls as she relives her past.
Wanting to go home to her love at last.
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Re: One Single Tear
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:30:51 AM AEST
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this is so very sad, brought a tear to my eye, but they are now together, I can't get over how powerful this piece is, *hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: One Single Tear
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by screwup on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:58:16 AM AEST
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this is soooooo sad... but it's VERY good. You have talent... Welcome to the site.
~screwup |
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Re: One Single Tear
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by mysticpoet on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:25:45 AM AEST
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| Thank-you for your comments, everytime I read it, it brings tears to my eyes. Sometimes it's hard to read. |
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Re: One Single Tear
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 04:55:45 PM AEST
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Deep and powerful..... and so very touching...
Glad they are together now...
Jenni |
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Re: One Single Tear
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by emystar on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:54:53 AM AEST
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Wowow this one guranteed to bring tears but also leaves aglo in the heart.
My mother passed long before my Dad but if I live 2 see this kindda of luv in my life from a mate I will have touched a bit of heaven.
but I saw it in my parents.
right before my father passed he said Momma's coming for me me she found a place in heaven.
luv, huggs, smiles, many tears,
emy |
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