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Stains of FAILURE-HOOD.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:43:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Fail!
Fail!
Fail!
I’ve FAILED!
I'M SCARED!
I-have-FAILED!!!!!!!!
I’M A FAILURE.
URE… URE… URE.
THERE’S NO CURE.
I’M A DUMB FAILURE…!
I A little FREAK.
I AM A dumb, FREAK.
FREAK… FREAK… FREAK.
ECHOES, STREAKS, WEAK… WEAK… WEAK!
Little FREAK!
You can’t under stand me.
You can’t enter me.
I’ll have to shoot my-self in the head.
Splat my brains all over my bed.
BeD… bEd.
THIS IS THE END...
Bloodied head, bed, I ignore what you said.
I can’t let you in! You’ll play with my head.
My hands have dried droplets of red.
Blood. Blood… my diary pages are too red.
I’M SOO SCARED!
BUT I CAN’T LET YOU IN!
Stains are smiling again.
I’m scared!
Blood stains. Scard stains. Cut stains.
My-life-is-full-of-STAINS!
I’LL HOLD MY HEAD AND SCREAM.
FLASHING STAINS. BAD DREAMS.
THIS IS THE BEGINNING… OF THE END…
AND I CAN’T TAKE IT AGAIN!!!!!!!!
That’s why I’ll bleed endless red…
And why ‘help’ with my head
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deathdrop
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2004-10-28 08:43:57]
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Re: Stains of FAILURE-HOOD.
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by Live2Die on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:53:17 AM AEST
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woooaahh...this is dark...and...scary...if you need anyone to talk to IM me,
Sharpieworshiper
But I strongly suggest IMing my friend 2ndchacne, She's awesome to talk to. Her IM is
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Re: Stains of FAILURE-HOOD.
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:07:07 AM AEST
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hope your terrible pain and torment ends for you one day soon, you deserve to be happy and be who you want to be..a very pained and tormented write
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Stains of FAILURE-HOOD.
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by screwup on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:02:17 AM AEST
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Rosie,
CRAZY and kinda PSYCOTIC... and o' corse DARK.... really good though, you express your emotions sooo well... pm me if you are in need.
~Deanna |
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Re: Stains of FAILURE-HOOD.
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 02:59:46 PM AEST
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Rosie...
Evidently... someone cares about u... or u wouldn't be getting these comments and offers to talk about ur probs... the only way any of us can help is if u let us in...????
This is good... it shows ur raw emotions... and u express them well...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Stains of FAILURE-HOOD.
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by nogoodnamesleft on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:52:15 PM AEST
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awesome poem...very dark..but good write...loves it....
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Re: Stains of FAILURE-HOOD.
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by secretwind on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:37:16 PM AEST
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Deep dark flow...I can feel ya on this one,reading this write seemed like reading some of my own emotionally tortured flows. Well written.sooner or later we find ways to adjust to the confusion we drift in.Take care.
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