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If I Were To Never Kiss You Again
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 07:39:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
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If I were to never kiss your lips again,
My life would be filled with undying pain,
Forever I’d be wanting & missing,
All the love & all of our passionate kissing.
To think I would never feel your touch,
Makes me feel sad inside & hurts me so much,
Your lips are moulded in the shape for mine,
We should be together from now ‘til the end of time.
If I could never again hold onto your arm,
The desire to continue to live would lose its charm,
If my lips were not to grace the beauty of yours,
On everything else in my life I’d shut the doors.
If we never again shared the same bed,
I’d feel like a massive part of me was dead,
To wake up next to you in the still of the night,
Takes away my fear & discards all my fright.
If never would my ears hear your sweet voice,
To stop living would be my only choice,
If my body felt nothing of your soft caress,
From myself I would detach & undress.
To imagine a life that didn’t include you,
Makes me feel so depressed & so very blue,
If I were to never kiss your lips again,
My life would be filled with such undying pain.
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Re: If I Were To Never Kiss You Again
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:10:29 AM AEST
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| Pixie this is such a beautiful and heartwrenching poem, I hope you always have what you love so dare for all eternity, this poem was so tender and full of feeling, both happy and sad, awesome images created before my eyes, I loved this write, you are so talented and have a beautiful way with words. |
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Re: If I Were To Never Kiss You Again
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by pander on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:28:28 AM AEST
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This has rapidly become one of my favourite pieces of your work.
I know it comes from your heart too.
Pander
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Re: If I Were To Never Kiss You Again
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:01:04 AM AEST
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I agree what Kindredblood_dragon said about this peice .awsome write pixie.
love and hugs |
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Re: If I Were To Never Kiss You Again
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by RhythmBndt on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:03:55 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful....also sad :( |
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Re: If I Were To Never Kiss You Again
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:40:30 AM AEST
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| Pixie, this write hits me right in the heart. I know the feeling well. Very well written piece. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: If I Were To Never Kiss You Again
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:47:56 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful write pixie, well done.
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Re: If I Were To Never Kiss You Again
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 03:55:28 PM AEST
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Great poem, Pixie...Straight from the heart. I know the feelings well...
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Re: If I Were To Never Kiss You Again
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by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:02:09 PM AEST
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| Beautiful!!!!!! |
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Re: If I Were To Never Kiss You Again
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 01:03:34 PM AEST
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Awww, Pix...
*cries* This is so sad, yet so sweet too.
I know how you feel, and I hope that you never lose each other.
Great writem
*hugs* Phil xxx
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