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Two Heartbeats
Contributed by
inoc
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 06:36:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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His fingers featherly touch my skin.
I feel the sensation as we slowly begin.
Capturing our image in my mind.
Belonging to me completly I usually find.
His heated breath of our loving desire.
Feeling warm inside I'm burning like fire.
Gentle tender moments of that passionate kiss.
Heart beats to the rythem which I can never resist.
Slippery bodies together in style.
Romanticly dancing for awhile.
Inhailing each emotion like the air we breath.
It is God's natrual desire that we never leave.
Holding on tight to capture that awsome climaxe.
The moment arises and we reach for the timex.
Reality hits us.
The day has just begun.
We're late for work.
Hubby now we have to run.
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inoc
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2004-10-28 06:36:58]
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Re: Two Heartbeats
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 06:39:09 AM AEST
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not too steamy for me, it was just right lol., great write, very cheeky hehe,
pixie xx |
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Re: Two Heartbeats
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by inoc on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 07:05:22 AM AEST
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sorry.... I clicked so WRONG...
I wanted to reply to Pixies comment...
*thanks Pixie for reading and commenting!!!*
cheers!~... |
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Re: Two Heartbeats
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by AliB on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 07:19:24 AM AEST
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Cool poem!!!!
Not too steamy for me either, the ending was funny, great write.
Alixx
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Re: Two Heartbeats
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 07:42:26 AM AEST
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| Wonderful, passionate write. Passion can never be too steamy. Loved the "timex" line......Mike |
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Re: Two Heartbeats
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:21:26 AM AEST
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| Steamy is good, lol steamy I like, and this was sensual tender, passionate and very steamy, visual, and beautifully written. |
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Re: Two Heartbeats
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:09:42 AM AEST
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Lol i didn't think it was really steamy at all.
how romantic and sweet.awsome write. |
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