|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
the cold truth
Contributed by
Dizza_13
on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:08:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
I missed you so much,
Filled with joy when you returned,
For so long I waited for your touch,
To see you was all my heart yearned.
But these feelings you don’t share,
You came back and didn’t want to talk,
All this time did you even care?
All my feelings you now mock.
You say it’s so bad,
No longer under this can I stand,
You say it’s so sad,
I was always there to hold your hand.
I loved you with all my heart,
My fragile core torn apart,
You have loved and been broken down,
Still your feet aren’t on the ground.
I’ve had enough of this pain,
I take the knife a cut the vein,
Let the heartbreak fade,
My only answer again the blade,
Once again I’m left alone,
The truth has know been shown.
Copyright ©
Dizza_13
... [
2004-10-28 05:08:52]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: the cold truth
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:16:17 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very sad and emotional write, I hope that one day you find the love you deserve,
takecare
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: the cold truth
(User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:33:56 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a fragile write
take care
cheers!~ |
|
|
Re: the cold truth
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:27:24 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| A vividly beautiful write, though showing much hurt and deep sadness, I'm soory that your hurt deeply by someone you truely loved, and I hope you oneday find someone that knows the meaning of true love and that it is for ever, cool poem. |
|
|
Re: the cold truth
(User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:30:13 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I really hope one day you find the love you deserve. Pixie's right. Great write, I can feel your pain. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
