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New Father
Contributed by
BloodyAngel
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:22:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I am an Angel, an Angel indeed
You don't know it though
My halo is too dark for you to see
It used to shine bright
Like a blinding star
But now its as black as the night sky
I disobeyed my father
And this is how I have to pay
My powers are gone
I can no longer help
Or stop the pain and suffering
Instead I can only watch and create more
I have a new father
Who is sort of like me
Except his halo is gone
And so are his wings
I have mine
But they are now black
I have a secret
That I cannot say
If I disobey him
Something worse than death
Shall happen to me
That would last for all eternity
So now I get on my knees
And bow down to him
My new father
The dark
Beautiful Angel
Lucifer
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BloodyAngel
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2004-10-28 00:22:48]
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Re: New Father
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:09:45 PM AEST
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| Awesome write, visual and vivid, creating clear images, and agony of crushed hopes, cool poem. |
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Re: New Father
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by doodley_5 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:25:44 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem.. i just hope you really dont bow down to him |
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