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Do not cross those honest lines
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:08:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Do not cross those honest lines
When venting all your pain
Venture with caution when with the blade
Don’t let the dance go all the way
And never let death lead
When I cannot cut in and save you
Always think of me before you
Cut away at your wrist
And scar my soul and tear me whole
I cannot live like this
I worry about you so
I can’t lose you now
Or I would die
And not come back
As I do when I kiss you
Your are my whole world
My simple true and beautiful girl
If you die I would go insane
I need you more than anything
More than everything
You mean most to me
You are what I love most
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2004-10-28 00:08:46]
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Re: Do not cross those honest lines
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:21:56 AM AEST
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Very heart wrenching write here, my friend.
It's really good that you care about this person so much but ya gotta stay strong no matter what happens.
I will put this person in my daily prayers.
Awesome writing.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: Do not cross those honest lines
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:18:51 AM AEST
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very sad write, but filled with words of care and friendship, great work,
pixie xx |
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