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October 4th
Contributed by
BloodyAngel
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:02:58 AM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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On October 4th, you chose to die
I continue to ask myself ‘why’
Sorry I couldn’t help you when you were feeling blue
I would have done anything, you know its true
I never got to hug you goodbye
Maybe that’s why I still cry
We failed to ask
Why you wore the mask
You didn’t have to hide
But maybe you failed when you tried
It doesn’t matter either way
We still miss you, to this day
Never forget what is true-
We will always remember you
Copyright ©
BloodyAngel
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2004-10-28 00:02:58]
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Re: October 4th
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:10:28 AM AEST
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I am so sorry to hear this. i hope you are doing fine. Beautiful tribute for your friend.
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Re: October 4th
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by jmpy84 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:27:09 AM AEST
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| sorry to hear this i went throught something simmilar |
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Re: October 4th
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:29:04 AM AEST
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First, I'm so sorry for your lost.
You have written a masterpeice even tho very sad.
I'm sure that all who read this will realize jus how fragile life is.
Hang in there and keep writing as you've shown your feelings well.
luv, huggs, strength, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: October 4th
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by inoc on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:24:03 AM AEST
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a brilliantly written poem on a sad subject...
keep writing though you are a natrual
cheers!~ |
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