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Angel
Contributed by
fading_light
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Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 11:37:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Filling my heart with desperate need
of solitude and darkness,
She glides on wings made of souls
that once roamed happy and free.
She lies in wait for the innocent
and light of heart.
Inside her chest beats an unquenchable flame
of hatred and hunger.
Here she flies drawn to my despair
like a moth to light.
And I lie in wait, longing for her
sombre presence to fill me
My Dark Angel of Death.
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fading_light
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2004-10-27 23:37:30]
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Re: Angel
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:04:39 AM AEST
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wow! beautiful yet dark! Wonderful write!
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Re: Angel
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by happybunnyfan on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:32:52 AM AEST
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| wow! very good for a first, i really liked it. keep it up |
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Re: Angel
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 07:27:37 AM AEST
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Nice write, yet . . .
"Inside her chest beats an unquenchable flame"
I'd have changed this to chest 'burns', to make it sound better.
Welcome to YDPC.
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Re: Angel
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by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:23:53 PM AEST
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| I really like it. |
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