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The Man in the Moon
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 11:18:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The man in the moon can no longer look at me
For his eyes are covered with a crimson sea
Completely consumed by the dark bloody red
I’m wondering now, is he dead?
What beast has slain my dear friend
Brought the moon to this bloody end
Took away his bright light
Taking his beauty out of my sight
Leaving him there for all to see
Covered in blood how could this be
Look at him so tattered and torn
The one who did this I shall scorn
I lay you to rest my sweet friend
I’m sorry that you met your end
To you who are now deceased
Goodnight, and please rest in peace
Copyright ©
CrimsonTears
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2004-10-27 23:18:55]
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Re: The Man in the Moon
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by SlimStaple on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 11:26:35 PM AEST
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| Wow. I was going to go look at the eclipse but I was just to tired and my house is sorruonded with trees. I liked this a lot, and i looooooooooove the moon. |
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Re: The Man in the Moon
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by fading_light on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 11:41:07 PM AEST
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| That's awsome! You really captured the affect of the eclipse! |
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Re: The Man in the Moon
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:14:08 AM AEST
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I too watched! I love the moon as well! Great write!
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Re: The Man in the Moon
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:59:28 PM AEST
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That was amazing, how you used an eclipse to symbolize death, really cool...I would've watched it (if you are talking about the recent one) but it had just rained and there was clouds everywhere...Really amazing poem
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