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---------------GiVe Up------------------
Contributed by
Delusions
on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You stare into my eyes,
as you slice my soft bare flesh.
You delve deep within within my soul
and tease the fear inside.
I turn my head away,
unable to sustain the glare,
unable to bare the pain any longer.
My crimson blood is flowing,
a thick stream that never ends.
Im numb and i can hardly breath.
But i try to scream,
no sound leaves my mouth.
You grab my throat,
so hard,
as i close my eyes,
i give up.
You kiss my bloodstained lips,
as i slowly feel my life slip away,
into darkness...........
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Delusions
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2002-11-18 05:00:00]
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Re: ---------------GiVe Up------------------
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by MyInspiration on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 05:23:49 AM AEST
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| That is a very powerful poem, I like it. Very passionate I can tell. |
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Re: ---------------GiVe Up------------------
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by OreO on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 09:41:10 AM AEST
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This is such a passionate poem
it's so full of love and pain and hunger
and desire as well, it says alot in such
deep words...This is a beautiful write
Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: ---------------GiVe Up------------------
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 09:47:00 AM AEST
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Awesome write...
Jenni |
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Re: ---------------GiVe Up------------------
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by flirtyrockstar on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 08:08:39 PM AEST
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| ...wow... |
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Re: ---------------GiVe Up------------------
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by frickinflamer on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 01:56:19 AM AEST
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| kick his or her ass! dont let them do that to you! sorry bout that. this is pretty good though. i likes it! deep with pain. hope this didnt happen to you in real life though... sorry if it did... |
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Re: ---------------GiVe Up------------------
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by bopeep on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 10:42:21 PM AEST
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| very passionate; i like. keep writing... |
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Re: ---------------GiVe Up------------------
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 08:04:20 PM AEST
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| Your writing is so deep. Keep it up. |
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Re: ---------------GiVe Up------------------
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 07:03:46 AM AEST
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| alot of passiona dn thought xgripx |
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Re: ---------------GiVe Up------------------
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by unforgiven on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 02:54:16 AM AEST
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this poems so sad but so truthful.....when ur with sumone that u love but they slowly squeeze the life out of u. another amazing poem huni bunches!!
mwa becca |
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