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Writhing
Contributed by
waos
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Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 10:31:16 PM in AEST
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Empty screams from a writhing creature
emptying life beside this knife.
Torn, broken, beaten features
break promises of broken life.
Emptying life beside this knife,
screaming incoherently of pain.
Break promises of broken life,
seizures of fear rule again.
Screaming incoherently of pain
she digs it deeper inside.
Seizures of fear rule again
but there's no more ways to hide.
She digs it deeper inside
root out the demon she knows.
But there's no more ways to hide,
her crumbling wall shows.
Root out the demon she knows;
torn, broken, beaten features.
Her crumbling wall shows
empty screams from a writhing creature.
Copyright ©
waos
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2004-10-27 22:31:16]
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Re: Writhing
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 10:36:34 PM AEST
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| great write. =] |
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Re: Writhing
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 03:23:21 AM AEST
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Very sad but awesomly written.
Hope u got the highest points posible once again.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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