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Fingertip Sight
Contributed by
waos
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Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:49:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Stab shadows,
leaving cratered walls.
Shoot out lights
dispelling all vision.
Color blind.
Judgment free.
Claw at masking layers of skin,
dig deeper within.
Search for truth
in burned away shadows.
Paint black all reflection, all sight.
Never know but what's felt.
Oh to be colorblind;
judgment free.
To let only fingertips see.
Copyright ©
waos
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2004-10-27 21:49:40]
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Re: Fingertip Sight
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:52:12 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. written very well. =] |
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Re: Fingertip Sight
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:52:14 PM AEST
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Those first two lines are amazing! The whole
thing is amazing but especially those first two.
I can see why you got such a good mark, but
hopefully your teacher isn't stricken with
nightmares. Very good poem, very deep.
Bobo (joel) |
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Re: Fingertip Sight
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 03:28:03 AM AEST
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Deep, intrieging, powerfull writing!
luv, huggs,hope,
emy |
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Re: Fingertip Sight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:52:41 PM AEST
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| Really intriguing and visual. I enjoyed reading it. Sort of dark but makes you think. Great job! |
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