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Sherrie3
Contributed by
marsh62287
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Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:27:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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look at me
and all you'll see
is all the happiness
there is to see
all her beauty
has made me see
just exactly
who i need to be with me
in all paradise
there is none to see
just as long
as i can be with she
all paradise may flee
but not the one
i'll have with she
in order to see
just how strong
love can be
with my beautiful
sherrie
Copyright ©
marsh62287
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2004-10-27 21:27:30]
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Re: Sherrie3
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 03:56:09 AM AEST
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Wel I know your Sherrie3's gotta luv this.
Very creative and heavenly beautifull masterpeice of luv-n-admiration.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Sherrie3
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by Stoney1 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 07:46:55 AM AEST
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It's a nice sentiment, but the rhyme is excruciating.
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