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this isn't real... I cant make this real
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 06:01:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am the anomaly.
You cant know me.
I am not here.
All this is passive,
overblown and romanticised.
My dreams of the snow covered woods aren't real.
All I know is this, I'm not real.
I reside within a nightmare.
I'm the one trying to save you...
To wake you...
To make you breathe...
Letting you leave the only place I can truly exist.
I am everything and more.
I have powers over you.
I can make the snow covered woods in my dreams.
I can hide in the forest of my self constructed angst.
Awaiting the only person who needs me to exist.
We can sing these childish nursery rhymes,
But all this is just make-believe.
You wont remember me when I'm gone.
I was never there.
Copyright ©
surge_joebot
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2004-10-27 18:01:22]
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Re: this isn't real... I cant make this real
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by immortal_pain on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 06:34:13 PM AEST
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| that was so dark, so awsome, i loved it i give it a thumbs up! X 10 |
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Re: this isn't real... I cant make this real
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:19:37 PM AEST
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awesome job...i liked it alot...great write
Lots of Love
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Re: this isn't real... I cant make this real
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:46:24 PM AEST
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wow! great job!! this gives you an erie feeling.. awesome
Peace and hope
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