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Scar Bleeds
Contributed by
AdamChantell
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Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 03:16:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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there is a hidden wound
covered by a scar
now it bleeds internally
you took this too far
my heart was once mended
only time could once heal
now its broken once more
pain is all that i may feel
I though you were different
you told me to just believe
"I am everything you ever needed"
now i am felt alone to bleed
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AdamChantell
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2004-10-27 15:16:45]
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Re: Scar Bleeds
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 03:22:06 PM AEST
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Aww, wow. This is so beautifully sad, I hope everything words out for you in the end...
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Scar Bleeds
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 03:35:42 PM AEST
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You said it all in
these three stanzas.
--Mothy |
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Re: Scar Bleeds
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by surge_joebot on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 06:18:44 PM AEST
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| I really couldn't have put it better myself... it was simple... breath taking... beautiful and scarey... i feel for you *big hugs* |
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