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my soul
Contributed by
x_midnight_x
on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 11:29:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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I sat down one day
and my soul flue away
it was like it was prey
no way i could stay.
My hart was pitch black
It was under attack
as quick as a flash
my soul felt like it was gone.
my fear still their
my hart bleeding
the son of the devil had come.
its blood thirsty
worser than a bat
and even a vampires cat!!!
it chaced me through the wicked woods.
my dress all ripted
my noese bleeding
this isent fair dont no body sare
the thing stoped it peeled of its mask
and out came my little brother with a scary look on his face.
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x_midnight_x
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2004-10-27 11:29:21]
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Re: my soul
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by skyblumoon on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 12:33:48 PM AEST
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This is very good. I like the way it made me laugh at the very end. I hope to read more of your poems.
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Re: my soul
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 06:24:49 PM AEST
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This was hilarious, Holly.. Keep writing..
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