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My Lady
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 07:31:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Where is the beautiful Lady
the lady who stole my heart
The lady of my dreams
my magnificent work of art
The more than perfect woman
in each and every way
My Lady, my love
who brightens up my day
Each moment of my life
she is in my every thought
I remember everything about her
and all the happiness she has brought
What a wonderful wonderful person
and how very lucky for me
That My Lady made the choice
that her lover I would be
I make a toast to her
champagne in a glass
For all the joy she brings
she surely is first class
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-10-27 07:31:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Lady
(User Rating: 1 ) by thumper on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 07:39:08 AM AEST (User
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This is so sweet and tender, Bruce. It must be nice to be thought of this way. Five stars to you!
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Re: My Lady
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 07:50:23 AM AEST (User
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awww how lovely., your wife is such a lucky woman, you always write so gently and lovingly,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: My Lady
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:33:31 AM AEST (User
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Beautifully tender and pasionate poem, full of heartfelt feelings, and composed with such beautifully vivid emotions, cool write. |
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Re: My Lady
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_bear on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 10:35:59 AM AEST (User
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great poem. Nice for a man to think of a woman in such a way~ |
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Re: My Lady
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 11:19:18 AM AEST (User
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awww bruce as always your writes are so sweet and so filled with love.
the rhyme was dead on all the way through.
the end kinda threw me. but this still was a wonderful poem. well done.
5 stars
Becky |
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Re: My Lady
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 12:19:45 PM AEST (User
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lovely Bruce
Michelle |
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Re: My Lady
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 04:37:04 PM AEST (User
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Ahhh the Prince of Romance strikes once more!!!
Lovely Bruce...
Jenni |
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Re: My Lady
(User Rating: 1 ) by Trisha on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 11:56:11 PM AEST (User
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She's very lucky to have you. You're a very caring person |
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Re: My Lady
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:39:47 PM AEST (User
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Bruce
Nice write it is filled with love and emotion.Guys can learn from this--instead of mocho try tenderness
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Re: My Lady
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 12:54:29 AM AEST (User
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wow such nice write.. and so much love is felt in this poem that you wrote .. I love it and you will get a vote from me that is for sure..
Just wish alot of guys felt this away.
butterflygirl.. take care |
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