|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
To The Rest of the World
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 07:06:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Hear; hear, here.
A whisper too loud;
Not heard
Just lying-
Echoed, coveted
The mirage-pricking fingertips
And the cracked perfection shrieking down
Quiet, lifeless
Smiling.
('Oh, that's so wonderful! I'm going to love this tomorrow!--
Dying.
(If-only-if-onlyifonly-)
Gone.
Dead air;
(Hollow like)
Wind chimes clinking forgetfully
As if minutes still blew by
A kite marooned
Afraid of falling down-
Silence.
Copyright ©
EternitysLyre
... [
2004-10-27 07:06:56]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: To The Rest of the World
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 07:08:24 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
emotional, dark write, good work,
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: To The Rest of the World
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:20:17 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I love your words.
Wind chimes clinking forgetfully
As if minutes still blew by
Terrific -
|
|
|
Re: To The Rest of the World
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:52:10 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Cursory comments do this no justice, and I'm annoyed that people seem to be looking over what you write of late - of course, I've missed it by a whole week, but at least i'm here now - because they're missing things that contain definite emotional value.
Anyway - just one more moan . . . mjgrl5 stole my quote. hmph.
Keep writing. |
|
|
Re: To The Rest of the World
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:28:19 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very abstract and interesting. The whole thing reminds me of wind chimes clanking at the whim of the breeze.
Stitch |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
