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Please Don't Cry Alone
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 06:59:10 AM in AEST
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Please my love don’t cry alone,
I know your heartaches gone full grown,
But I am here to help to dry your eyes,
I am the only who will comfort your cries.
Let me hold you close to my heart,
Stop you from feeling so torn apart,
To think of you alone & feeling sad,
Makes me hate myself, it makes me mad.
To know that I have done this to you,
It is all my fault that you are feeling blue,
I have never seen you so down before,
I have never seen you lay in a heap on the floor.
I will be strong enough to lift you up,
Fill to the brim your now empty cup,
Never again will you sleep alone in our bed,
I will once again out thoughts of love in your head.
I am hurting to know how you’re feeling,
It is me who has sent your soul reeling,
But I will make it up to you I promise,
So to you my love I’m sending this kiss.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-10-27 06:59:10]
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Re: Please Don't Cry Alone
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 07:01:44 AM AEST
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Ouch. This hit me with the full force of that feeling of having hurt someone and not knowing how to fix it. I haven't felt that for a long time, but maybe I should have. Goodness, this was an eye opener for me. Thanks for sharing. I know you and he will work it out.
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Re: Please Don't Cry Alone
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 07:33:58 AM AEST
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| I hope he reads it. It sure tells him how you feel |
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Re: Please Don't Cry Alone
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by Crash on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:10:27 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem, i am sure at one time or another we have all felt that way towards our loved ones |
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Re: Please Don't Cry Alone
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:21:39 AM AEST
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| Good |
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Re: Please Don't Cry Alone
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:23:36 AM AEST
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Hurt I know that feeling, though cant remeber anymore wether it was me that hurt or they, guess times fades the agonies.
Beautifull poem written well and with feeling, emotional images painted, telling a story, and passonate apoligies, awesome poem pixie. |
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Re: Please Don't Cry Alone
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by RhythmBndt on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:10:01 AM AEST
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I felt that one sweetheart :( *HUG*
Excellent write. |
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Re: Please Don't Cry Alone
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 10:38:45 AM AEST
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| awwwww poor pixie..love n stuff. hope it gets better. bear |
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Re: Please Don't Cry Alone
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by avanottingham on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:39:11 AM AEST
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This is my favorite piece by you so far (though I haven't nearly finished reading all your work yet), there's just something that stirs up all my emotions and makes me want to cry, and at the same time smile through the tears. I don't know why though, but I love it when poems do that to me.
~Ava |
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