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Our Conclusion

Contributed by MyInspiration on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



It's eating away at me, the thought of you with him. You may regret it now, but it's to late to confess your sin. I never thought you would do such a thing, why did you hurt me like this? I guess this is the end, for us, nothing exists.

I reach out my hand to you, grab it, hold it close. It's all you will ever get, don't ask, because it was you that chose. We missed our chance to be together. I'm sorry, I know now that it won't work, never. But my soul still burns, I still love you, forever.

So this is where it ends, no expression on my face. I wish it never came to this, our lives are nothing but waste. Don't try to fix it, don't try to make it better. If you could would you? Take it back? No, you can't, you can't make things better.

Don't play with me again, I don't want us to meet. Leave me here, I can't stand to hear it, your voice so sweet. Don't think I can't see it, don't think I don't know. This is the end, please, just go.




Copyright © MyInspiration ... [ 2002-11-18 01:00:00]
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Re: Our Conclusion (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 01:28:03 AM AEST
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very good poem, and I like the way it was written without separation between each line.


Re: Our Conclusion (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 03:14:47 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this one alot it's so sad
and full of pain and love and inspiration
Thanks for sharing this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.




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