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No Comfort In A Bladeless Knife
Contributed by
girlg0newrong
on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 10:00:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A secret pain silenced by a slice
But theres no comfort in a bladeless knife
Life as the pencil the knife the eraser
That leaves my skin to be the paper
The pencil records great novels of pain
All over my body again and again
Till the surface grows full and the led seeps inside
An internal throbbing I can’t make subside
The fluid making haste to escape the vein
As I quickly try to escape the pain
Then a numbing calmness round me falls
And peace takes over inside these walls
Nothing left but stains on the floor
But I’m not hurting anymore
A secret pain I silenced tonight
But the comfort of the blade of the knife
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girlg0newrong
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2004-10-26 22:00:51]
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Re: No Comfort In A Bladeless Knife
(User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 10:22:03 PM AEST
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I feel your pain girl..
I know that cutting is comfort
I know that writing about cutting is comfort
I hope that one day that writing takes place of the cutting completely....
Take care sweetie
Evelyn
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Re: No Comfort In A Bladeless Knife
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 11:14:27 PM AEST
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this is a great write that can only come of you
i love the wording and the rhyms the topic is no crime that sweet sting that drowns out everything and brings to mind a sweetness that is you |
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Re: No Comfort In A Bladeless Knife
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 04:24:20 AM AEST
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| i love it! |
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Re: No Comfort In A Bladeless Knife
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by Crash on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:18:37 AM AEST
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| This is one of the best slice-suicide poems i have ever read, and i have a few of my own. good job |
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