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Better Dayz

Contributed by girlg0newrong on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:43:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

I dream of better dayz
like the ones already past
I dream about hours no plauged with grief
When I close my eyes I can feel the warm energy
That energy keeps me alive
I'm slowly losing it
I barely recognize my own smile now
There's not a big enough supply of oxygen in my lungs to produce a laugh
It's impossible to be happy here
hope is non-existent
My tears like rivers have run until dry
I am a wild flower choked out by the weeds
what does it feel like to be an innocent, oblivious, carefree child?
I never got the chance
I dream of what it must be like for others with no worry
I can't tell you how that feels
How do you live your life to the fullest when your trapped inside a tiny box?
I wish I could live in the past
the present is misery
the future is hazy
when from reality I want to run away
I close my eyez and I dream fo better dayz

Copyright © girlg0newrong ... [ 2004-10-26 21:43:54]
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Re: Better Dayz (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 10:30:11 PM AEST
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Very nice write
I really relate to your poems
I pray for better dayz for you!!!!!

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