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The Quiet and The Mourned
Contributed by
xafflictedx
on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 08:29:02 PM in AEST
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Feelings of anticipation
Are filling my mouth.
I vomit the words that fall,
Splat!
On the page
The ink does write,
A Tiger that
Cuddles next to its prey.
To fade until the
Eye must squint to
Entertain the brain.
So hold the flame close and
Bat at The Moth.
Once more until it is Dead.
Reckoning that justice has been
Dealt to the murderer.
So cry your eyes out.
Until they are held in your hand,
Close to your heart
To see how black it is
For killing innocence.
Copyright ©
xafflictedx
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2004-10-26 20:29:02]
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Re: The Quiet and The Mourned
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 04:00:29 PM AEST
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That is pretty clever..
Cuddly tiger, me and Dead Reckoning
are all here!
A strange trio...
--Mothy |
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Re: The Quiet and The Mourned
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 03:50:29 PM AEST
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| i agree with mothy, this was excellent and i loved how you used ourselves. well dew another masterpeice in it's entirety. |
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Re: The Quiet and The Mourned
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:09:04 PM AEST
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Hey man...this was awesome for an impromtu...and cool how you used people in it. Just a question though, was the so cry your eyes out part about me...probly not, maybe I'm just desperate or something...oh well...awesome poem
Mason |
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Re: The Quiet and The Mourned
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by Clarity_Rising on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:15:31 AM AEST
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| Your poem conveyed some interesting pictures, it was very creative. |
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