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BeYonD MiSerY
Contributed by
butterfly_love
on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 08:26:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Look far beyond misery
And face reality
Deal with what you have now
Don’t compare your past with your present
You’re only hurting yourself
No 2 are alike lose the past memories
And start a new
Break the ice inside your heart
And freeze your tears.
Subtract your memories of the past
Add more love to what you have
Multiply your family and friends
You get a whole heart instead of a half
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2004-10-26 20:26:21]
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Re: BeYonD MiSerY
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 01:10:31 AM AEST
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very lovely write with a great message
Michelle |
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Re: BeYonD MiSerY
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by Crash on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:20:50 AM AEST
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| interesting conveyence of your message, good job. |
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Re: BeYonD MiSerY
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by Yousef on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 06:39:43 PM AEST
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Really beautiful, the way you discused the issue is very interesting and the issue itself is so important. I really loved your finale
"Subtract your memories of the past
Add more love to what you have
Multiply your family and friends
You get a whole heart instead of a half "
Very well wriiten indeed.
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Re: BeYonD MiSerY
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by Clarity_Rising on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:13:56 AM AEST
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I loved your poem as a whole, buy especially the last 4 verses. That was extremely creative.
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Re: BeYonD MiSerY
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:42:17 PM AEST
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| Very true and very good! People do tend to dwell on the past instead of realizing things they have now. I think it is very uplifting especially to those who are in that suicidal mind state and dwelling on what has happened instead of thinking about how much more good can come in their life. Very good piece. I like it a lot. Great message! |
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