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Contributed by
TornApart
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Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 07:46:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Trying to hold my head up high.
Not noticing everyone laughin and pointing.
Just sailing by..
Why am i so hated? why am i so unloved?
I hate all this i just want to die!!!!!!!!
So then id be able to fly..
No-one will notice me gone
No-one will cry..
I was just a big mistake
Not destined to be..
So i'm just gonna get this knife.....
And be free!!!!
Clenchin my fist.Stabbing the knife deep into my skin....
Blood pours out.........Now i guess you win??????
I fall to the floor motionless.bleeding
Everythings slowly going away........
Do not try and save me
Cos i no longer wanna stay!!!!!!!!!!
Copyright ©
TornApart
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2004-10-26 19:46:01]
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Re: untitled
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by Evilnn on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:11:32 PM AEST
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Very powerful poem, I can relate very much.
But we have to be strong, people like you and I. I hope writing this poem somehow gives you some release of emotion and maybe even feel better through the tears.
I hope you are okay
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Re: untitled
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by Clarity_Rising on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:11:24 AM AEST
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Your inner cries of pain are unleashed. That was a creative twist to the suicidal scene.
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Re: untitled
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:44:44 PM AEST
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ouch very powerful poem... AMazing write i totally felt like this was happening to me... Great job, i just hope you really don't feel that way because i don't think anyone should feel that hate and unloved... You'll always be loved and never hated by all.. Keep up the great work..
~UnKnOwN BUtTErfLY~ |
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