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WHAT A VIEW:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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THE SKY IS BLUE THE WIND STILL BLOW.
STRONG AND HARD FROM ITS HEART.THE FLOWERS DISPLAY
THE SMELL STILL STAY,WHAT'S THE MATTER WITH THIS PLACE.
THE WATER IS FRESH, SALT AN WET.WHO REALY GIVE .
LET'S SUPPOSE ALL ISN'T WELL,WHO WOULD YOU BLEAM.
FOR THIS HELLISH SPELL?MEN CAUSE EVERYTHINK WAS MADE PERFECT
FOR US ALL.
GREED, HATE AN PHYSCIAL LUST,WE DISTROYED THE BLESSING FROM ABOVE.
WE THEN REMEMBER THERE IS A GOD, WHEN WE NO LONGER FEEL HIS LOVE.
SO I SAY TO YOU ,DON'T BE A HOG.HELP THOSE THAT NEED,YOUR WEALTH COMES FROM
GOD. I PRAY THAT HE WOULD CONTINUELY BLESS YOU AN YOUR FAMILY FROM THIS HELLISH STEW.
THAT IS HAPPENING ALL AROUND YOU,REMEMBER HE IS THE GOD THAT RULE.
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2002-11-17 22:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: WHAT A VIEW:
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:59:09 PM AEST (User
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maybe not using such excessive capitalization would make this easier on the eyes. the spelling needs some work here and there. |
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