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FOOTPRINTS ON MY HEART
Contributed by
StoneAngel
on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 04:59:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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From the moment you walked
Into my life
You left
Footprints on my heart
Footprints that I
Have tryed to errase
I should've known
Right from the start
That the footprints
Would hurt forever
You being here by my side would
one day vanish
And we would no long be in love
I dared not hope
That you would leave
Me watching our footprints
In the dust blow away
But I will always cherish
Those footprints
On my heart.
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StoneAngel
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2004-10-26 16:59:51]
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Re: FOOTPRINTS ON MY HEART
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 05:01:10 PM AEST
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| Great write, simple, yet it gets a deep point across to. |
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Re: FOOTPRINTS ON MY HEART
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by emocutie07 on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 08:22:48 PM AEST
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| Simple, but very touching, nice job |
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Re: FOOTPRINTS ON MY HEART
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 06:19:38 PM AEST
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great stuff Laina...
especially this:
"I dared not hope
That you would leave
Me watching our footprints
In the dust blow away"
that is genius! :) |
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Re: FOOTPRINTS ON MY HEART
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by StoneAngel on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 08:13:51 PM AEST
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| I love this poem, this actually happend to me. It's how i feel. This is why I'm screwing up this year in my relationships cause im not over one of my ex's. My first and 4 ex this year. Im on bf #13 but soon dumping him cause hes a jerk. So now im going to wait for boyfriend #4. |
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